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Jul 19, 2010 14:41:09 GMT -6
Post by WolfGlee on Jul 19, 2010 14:41:09 GMT -6
Prologue
I gulped. Sweat poured down my knuckles as I clutched the sword harder. Lightning split the sky and a burst of light erupted. I stared into the face of my enemy. Or as I should say, my best friend. Her white hair was flowing in a sea weed motion. Her bright red eyes pierced through the storm. Another set of thunder boomed. The gateway to the spirit world was opening. I was frozen in my tracks. My friend smiled, sharp yellow teeth stuck out of the thin mouth. I had to kill the demon inside of her before it’s too late. But hold up I’m getting way ahead of myself. You don’t know what’s happening right now. But let me warn you. What I’m about to tell you will be the future of our world. So if you are too scared to read on I cannot force you to. But for the brave ones follow my advice.
Take a deep breath Remember who you are Get ready to scream Read on
Chapter 1.
“Hmp” I gasped. A boy with freckles dotting his face and bright orange hair slammed me against a locker. His gang surrounded me. “What do you have to say for yourself…before I beat up your pretty little face” He cackled. I glared at him. “You should have not beaten Kaman…now it looks like he got hit by a car” I retorted. The boy raced his fist. “Say goodbye to your face Kalya” He sneered. I raced up my foot and kicked at his gut as hard as I can. “How’s that Tom” I yelled. I punched Tom at the mouth. He started screaming. Blood dripped from the side as he scrambled to his feet. Tom pulled out a small pistol from his jacket. And just to top this all off, my luck came. The principle marched through the hall. “TOM” he screeched. I smiled. “Good luck pulling this one off” I whispered.
(This is what I have writen so far...hehe it reminds me of maximum ride....snap didnt mean to do that)
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Jul 19, 2010 14:47:49 GMT -6
Post by ♪Lαb♫ on Jul 19, 2010 14:47:49 GMT -6
That's good! I like it!
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Jul 19, 2010 14:51:52 GMT -6
Post by WolfGlee on Jul 19, 2010 14:51:52 GMT -6
Thanks
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Jul 20, 2010 11:28:43 GMT -6
Post by WolfGlee on Jul 20, 2010 11:28:43 GMT -6
OK second part of chapter 1
He sneered at me. Like I care. The principle yanked at Tom’s arm. “Get up” he hissed his voice unusually scratchy. I’ve heard he drinks. I walked away from the Mexican standoff between Tom and the principle. Only to stop dead in my tracks. A girl with fiery white hair and bright orange eyes stood in my way. “Hey Trista” I whined darting my gaze somewhere else. Rumors are going around saying Trista is like a blood and machine gun fanatic. And that one time in class they had to do a book report on the Civil War. Turned out she did it all on the wounds and blood. “I saw what you did” she whispered. I looked up at her. “What do you mean” I asked raising my eyebrows. She stared at me. “What you did…I saw it” Trista whispered again. I rolled my eyes. “Ummm of course you did” I retorted waving my hand to show everybody in the hall. “Hello I think everybody saw me punch Tom” I said annoyed. Trista still looked at me confused. I gave out an aggravated sigh and pushed my way past her.
Well my luck went upside down from then on. One I got detention, and two, everyone knows about my conversation with Trista. I just wanted school to end. Bring the bell finally rang. I jumped out of my seat yelling FREEDOM of course that’s what I said in my head. I grabbed my book bag and raced out of the door. A swarm of students filled the hallway. More unlucky stuff coming to you live from Kalya. I pushed my way through them. Rude… right? Slamming open the front door I was out in the school front yard. I jogged down the marble stairs happy to get out of the freak fest. My book bag swayed back and forth as I exited the school yard now walking on the side walk. “Kalya!” I spun around angrily at the sound of my name. Tom came running towards me. “What do you want” I hissed. My hands clenched into fists. He wrapped his arms around me. “What the…..” I managed to say. Tom pressed his lips against mine. Warmth flooded through me, I relaxed my hands. Man did it feel good. I don’t know how long we stood there wrapped in each others arms. Finally we pulled away. I stared at him. “Why the heck did you do that” I spluttered my lips fuzzy from his. Tom shrugged. “Because you’re…well your…pretty” he stumbled. I glared at him. “But you are dating Janet” I snapped. Hurt filled Tom’s eyes. “But I love you” He said. “Oh so to say you love me, you try to clip me with a pistol” I retorted darting my gaze somewhere else.
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Jul 20, 2010 15:42:50 GMT -6
Post by ♪Lαb♫ on Jul 20, 2010 15:42:50 GMT -6
xD I like it! It's good!
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Jul 20, 2010 15:51:12 GMT -6
Post by WolfGlee on Jul 20, 2010 15:51:12 GMT -6
Thanks XD
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Jul 21, 2010 11:17:33 GMT -6
Post by WolfGlee on Jul 21, 2010 11:17:33 GMT -6
alright continuation of Ch.1
I ignored him. Turning around I marched away.
Yeah I know I was mad. I stomped into my house slamming the door behind me. Throwing my book bag onto the kitchen counter, I flung myself onto the sofa. I picked up the remote flipping through channels. Finding nothing I left it on House and got up. I walked over to the kitchen. Opening the fridge, I rummaged through its remains. “Great have to make a grocery list” I mumbled sarcastically. I grabbed a soda and clicked open top. “Sweetie you know not to drink soda with out my permission” A woman with frizzy strawberry blonde hair strolled down the stairs. I rolled my eyes. “Ok mom…can I have soda” I asked sweetly. Which FYI I don’t do. My mom looked at me sternly. “Alright, since you have it already open” She said reluctantly. I gobbled it down wiping my mouth with my sleeve. “Honey don’t drink that fast and grab a napkin to wipe your mouth…not your sleeve” Mom said annoyed. She grabbed a napkin and started wiping my face. “Mom I’m not a baby anymore” I hissed. Mom pulled the napkin away. “I am tired of this behavior” She snapped. I looked up at her. “Go to your room” Mom snarled pointing to the stairs. I screamed and ran up the stairs banging the door behind me. I threw myself on my bed sobbing. I didn’t mean to hurt mom. I closed my eyes. My head throbbed and tear stains streaked my face. I took a deep breath. Everything inside of me screeched for me to cry. But I didn’t, instead I fell asleep.
I sat bolt right up from my bed. Sweat poured down my face. I didn’t know how long I was asleep. Another scream echoed through the hallway. “Mom!” I yelled throwing off my covers. I jumped out of bed and raced to the door. I tried turning the knob but it wouldn’t budge. Another scream sounded like an alarm. I banged on the door yelling. “Mom I’m coming” I hollered. I tried the knob again but it still wouldn’t open. I leaped over to where I kept my stick. It was smooth and large at its width. I rammed it at the door screaming. Nothing. I stopped and threw the stick to the side. Silence, there was no more screaming instead it was replaced with an eerie silence. “Mom” I choked. I turned the knob again and the door opened. I stepped out into the hallway. I then bolted down to mom’s room. The door was ajar and an awful stench filled the room. I kicked open the door. The room was pitch black. I flicked the lights on. Nobody was inside.
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Jul 22, 2010 14:13:51 GMT -6
Post by WolfGlee on Jul 22, 2010 14:13:51 GMT -6
Last part of Ch.1
I searched the house. Nobody…it was just me. I broke down crying. This couldn’t be happening. I tossed myself onto the sofa. My sobs echoed through the empty house. I socked the pillow that was on the sofa. “This is so stupid” I cried. I shut my eyes, and the image of the screams flashed through my mind. I clenched the pillow harder. “Kalya” a familiar voice sounded above my head. I looked up. “Mom” I said. Relief flushed over me…but only for a moment. There was something wrong with her. I squinted my eyes; my mom’s eyes were blood shot red. “Mom you need to see a doctor” I gasped. She smiled, and pointed yellow teeth stuck out. Her hand raised to reveal it was actually a claw. I shrieked in horror. Suddenly the front door flung open. “Trista” I said completely confused. She held a gun I had never seen before. I scrambled off the sofa. Trista had the gun pointed at mom. “Stay back” Trista yelled. I stepped back, my heart thumped against my chest. BAM my mom lurched forward, swiping the gun out of Trista’s hand. Trista hurdled backwards. The odd looking gun slid across the wood floor. I don’t know what came over me, but I leapt after it. Everything seemed to be in slow motion. I snatched the gun; my mom came forward after me. I pulled the trigger. A blue beam shot out from it and crashed into mom. She did a bone-chilling scream, and then…ashes. Mom was turned into ashes. I dropped the gun. Trista stood up and brushed off some of the ashes that flew over to her. My mouth gaped. “I…I…I shot mom” I stammered. Trista eyed me. “You didn’t shot her…you shot the demon inside of her” She said. I rolled my eyes. “Really demons like that’s true” I said. But something itched inside of me that she was telling the truth. “Think back when you punched Tom…was there something odd about him” She asked calmly. I sat back on the sofa thinking. Then it clicked. “His eyes were red” I mumbled. Trista sat down next to me and nodded. “But what about when he kissed me” I said looking at her. She thought for a moment then said, “His spirit probably got away and he must have really loved you”. I was still dazed by all of this. Trista got up and walked to the fridge. That’s when I noticed what she was wearing. It looked almost like armor, but wasn’t. She wore all black and a belt sagged to the left. A sword hung from the belt and so did a gun pouch. She rummaged through the fridge mumbling to her self. Trista then found a soda and came back. “When I saw you do that 360 kick I knew you where one of us” She began, clicking open the soda can. “How do you know I don’t take gymnastics or cheerleading” I sneered. She gazed at me. “Because I looked through every file on you…and you don’t take any sports” Trista said putting the soda down. I snorted angrily. “Anyone could have done that” I remarked. She shook her head. “But not when they’re pinned” Trista said taking another sip of the soda. I sat back. “What did you mean by your one of us” I asked not making eye contact. “You’re a gatekeeper” She said finishing the soda. I laughed. “Where did you get that from…Harry Potter” I said. Trista glared at me. “No I didn’t even watch Harry Potter” She snapped. I looked up at her taken aback. “Whatever” I said quietly. Trista stood up and made her way to the door. “I will see you tomorrow at school” She said. Trista then stepped out of the house. I ran to the door about to say I’m sorry, but she was gone.
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Aug 5, 2010 14:32:40 GMT -6
Post by Nik on Aug 5, 2010 14:32:40 GMT -6
I need to write now, kthnx And post it here. And post it here and catch up to the writing meme that's suddenly going on. DDDDD: Maybe I'll do that.
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