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Due Day
Sept 26, 2010 20:02:35 GMT -6
Post by dogdemon67 on Sept 26, 2010 20:02:35 GMT -6
Smoky smiled evilly as he walked to the leaders den. He wiped his smile off his face. When Smoky got to the leaders den, He barked, "Flash! You here?" Smoky waited for Flash's answer so that Flash's time can come......
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Due Day
Sept 27, 2010 16:53:22 GMT -6
Post by WolfGlee on Sept 27, 2010 16:53:22 GMT -6
Flash yawned. "What is it Smoky?" He barked sleepily. Flash stretched and scratched his ear. He looked curiosly at Smoky. "Whats wrong?"
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Due Day
Sept 28, 2010 18:43:06 GMT -6
Post by dogdemon67 on Sept 28, 2010 18:43:06 GMT -6
Smoky tried hard not to show that his adrenaline was pumping. "Okay, well I have to make this quick.." Smoky started, and trailed off, because his smile was showing. It was a smile of evilness and hatred. "Well, lets start one thing. You thought I was loyal as a warrior, right? Well you were wrong! Today will be the day of my success! And leadership!" Smoky finished quickly, then lunged for Flash's throat. He hit his mark on the spot, due to all his training. He whacked Flash on the side of the head with one arm, while using the other to drive Flash back from his throat. The whack caused Flash to fall, when Smoky pinned flash quickly. In a few seconds, Flash was pinned, and Smoky stared evilly satisfied at Flash. "Any last words?" Smoky asked him, his evil grin showing even more teeth than normal.
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Due Day
Sept 28, 2010 20:44:34 GMT -6
Post by Wolfstar on Sept 28, 2010 20:44:34 GMT -6
(Oooo..... Can Icy's come in???)
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Due Day
Sept 30, 2010 17:43:04 GMT -6
Post by WolfGlee on Sept 30, 2010 17:43:04 GMT -6
"What the heck?" Flash spat. His heart lurched forward. Who could he trust? Flash rolled sideways knocking Smoky off balance. He then lunged at the throat. Grabbing it he flung Smoky into the wall. There was a crack. Flash turned around. Thinking Smoky was finished.
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Due Day
Oct 9, 2010 12:04:34 GMT -6
Post by dogdemon67 on Oct 9, 2010 12:04:34 GMT -6
But Smoky wasn't finished. "I guess those were your last words, eh? I'll take that as a yes!" Smoky barked, now angry. He stood up and leaped at Flash one more time, but this time aiming for next to Flash. He landed, and headbutted his chest until Flash hit the wall, disregarding the blood that was coming out of his back. "Now you die!" Smoky barked, choking Flash against the wall. Smoky held Flash so he was unable to move, until he died. But Smoky didn't know about the wolf that watched the whole thing...
((Now Icy comes in!))
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Due Day
Oct 9, 2010 19:26:15 GMT -6
Post by Wolfstar on Oct 9, 2010 19:26:15 GMT -6
(YEA!)
Icy walked toward's Flash's den. It was the 5 time Smoky had gone some where without organizing the patrols. The clan had made Icy go look for him. She had no idea wy though. Icy had decided to check Flash's den first. When she got there she peered in. What she saw shocked her. Smoky had attacked Flash and was trying to kill him. What the heck is going on??! Icy thought. She watched Flash throw Smoky into a wall. Flash will take care of that trader. She thought. For some unknown reason she imagined what it would be like if Flash was dead and shocked herself with a feelling of grief. She saw Smoky start to choke Flash. Icy stepped in the den. She couldn't watch Smoky murder Flash! Seeing that the hadn't noticed her she flicked a bush next to Flash's den to make it rustle and tried to act causul but the second Icy starts to act causul you know somethings up. She let her gaze fall on both of them. She braced herself to dodge an attack that could or could not happen.
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Due Day
Oct 10, 2010 9:18:06 GMT -6
Post by dogdemon67 on Oct 10, 2010 9:18:06 GMT -6
Smoky heard the rustling of a bush. He started to worry, in case someone saw him. So he let Flash fall to the ground, allowing him to live. For now! Smoky thought, deciding to make sure Flash died. But when Smoky looked by the entrance and saw Icy, he thought his smile couldn't have gotten wider. Like father like daughter! Heh heh, gotta kill 'em both! Smoky thought, believing it was clever. "Icy, I bet your here for the patrols! Sorry about that, I will tell you them after our patrol, with you, me, and Flash. So lets go! Right now!" Smoky barked, and ran out of the den. They had a border patrol to go on, to make sure that Riverclan and Shadowclan weren't crossing borders. Smoky led Icy and Flash to the camp entrance, and started to walk out.
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Due Day
Oct 16, 2010 10:20:46 GMT -6
Post by ♪Lαb♫ on Oct 16, 2010 10:20:46 GMT -6
(Sorry for spam. But so Smoky tries to kill Flash and Icy then expects them to follow him into the woods?)
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Due Day
Oct 19, 2010 17:05:50 GMT -6
Post by dogdemon67 on Oct 19, 2010 17:05:50 GMT -6
((Basically! Interesting, isn't it? Smoky is in an evil mood, tries to kill Flash, but Icy comes in and makes them go on patrol Very random, isn't it?))
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Due Day
Oct 20, 2010 18:10:27 GMT -6
Post by WolfGlee on Oct 20, 2010 18:10:27 GMT -6
(using an I point of view)
My mind swirled with thoughts, questions to be exact. Why is Smoky doing this? who can I trust? I stumbled to my feet only to hack up blood. It splattered on the ground like droplets of rain. I glared angrily at Smoky and bared my teeth. "Im not going down that easily" I growled. I again tried standing, but fell. My head banged on the stone floor. I never knew pain could be this great. I painfully lifted my head. 'Smoky...why are you doing this?" I wheezed. Blood dripped from the corners of my mouth, and I spat it out.
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Due Day
Oct 28, 2010 11:23:57 GMT -6
Post by dogdemon67 on Oct 28, 2010 11:23:57 GMT -6
((I am going to practice this post with a first person point of view...I need practice!)) I looked behind me to see no one was following. I ran back to the leaders den, and saw that Flash was having trouble standing. No, no, this won't do at all! I whispered, almost saying it loud enough for Icy and Flash to hear. I ran to Flash, and got a hold of the scruff of his neck, and pulled, but not hard enough to rip his loose fur off. I got Flash to stand, then let him lean on my shoulder. It was hard, with Flash being bigger and heavier than me. But I managed to do it. I told him, "Now Flash, you have to walk out of here nice and strong, or I will leave you in here with no one to help you. I will leave you here to bleed to death, so don't tell any one about what I did. Don't make it seem like your hurt either, or I will leave you in the forest." I said that slowly and carefully, letting Flash take that in. I also said it for Icy, since it was a threat to her too. I could bite her neck hard, so she cant do anything about it. Then abandon her in here, or in the forest. It would be as simple as that!
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Due Day
Oct 28, 2010 20:06:37 GMT -6
Post by Wolfstar on Oct 28, 2010 20:06:37 GMT -6
(I'll use first person point of view too.)
I looked at Smoky. I reflected on how weird it was that Smoky thought we were stupid enough to follow him on patrol. He must be pretty stupid. I then figured out that he had a plan to force us to follow him. I was on my toes ready for a fight. I listened to what he had to say but I wouldn't be that easy to trick. All you had to do was scream and the whole clan would see what was happening though I really wouldn't want to do that. I narrowed my eyes. A thinly hid chalange was there. I was daring him to do it but that probably wasn't what I need to do. I didn't say anything though and let Flash decide what to do.
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Due Day
Nov 17, 2010 19:27:36 GMT -6
Post by dogdemon67 on Nov 17, 2010 19:27:36 GMT -6
Smoky shot a quick look to Icy, then walked over to her. He leaned in close to her ear and whispered, "If you even dare to try to mess with the way things are going to be, you will regret it. I will make you regret it, so you had better be smart and follow what I say. And trust me when I say that the outcome of you messing with my plans won't be pretty. So, since you are Flash's daughter, why don't you go help him come along in the patrol?" Smoky finished with a low, threatening growl that was too quiet for Flash to hear. He stood up straight and glared at Icy for a few seconds, then went back to Flash. "Hey Flash, my good ol' buddy! I think your daughter has something to say." Smoky looked back to Icy with a look and a silent snarl that said, "You had better come up here to convince him to come along the patrol."
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