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Post by ♪Lαb♫ on Sept 24, 2010 20:22:22 GMT -6
Okay I have not typed/written the plot yet but I was thinking something along these lines:
Scourge finds out that his father is alive and wants to track him down. When he leaves Shadowclan Rae is heartbroken. So she decides to leave and go on a journey looking for him. The story could be about how they cope with being apart, thinking that they are dead, thinking about feeling crap, etc.
I know it sucks! Lemme think of something better later...
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Post by audie on Sept 24, 2010 20:25:11 GMT -6
xDD Hmmm.... It's pretty good, but, maybe Scourge's dad comes to ShadowClan, searching for Scourge? Idk, just throwing it out there... xP Gonna wait to hear what Nik has to say...(:
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Post by ♪Lαb♫ on Sept 24, 2010 20:26:33 GMT -6
xD my brain is dead atm. i will think of something creative later!
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Post by audie on Sept 24, 2010 20:27:37 GMT -6
xD Lol, -whispers YTB, Why?, YTB, Why?-
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Post by Nik on Sept 25, 2010 12:21:07 GMT -6
i like the plot. like audie i was thinking it was his dad (scourge's) that came to shadowclan. with, like, an odd kind of regret. and then scourge isn't going to be soft about the whole ordeal, because of what happened in his past owo and rae is mashed in there, kinda curious about what happens, a bit suspicous about scourge's dad. snooping. o3o;
lol i dunno. xD just sharing an idea.
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Post by audie on Sept 25, 2010 12:35:15 GMT -6
Hmmm.... Yeah, I kinda like that, but I kinda want Raelon to be more involved in the story. :3
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Post by Nik on Sept 25, 2010 12:37:08 GMT -6
D:> i'm so sorry~ let me think~
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Post by audie on Sept 25, 2010 12:39:28 GMT -6
xDD Haha okk(:
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